The acting is brilliant and the story is truly original (though I think some of the fantasy elements don't quite gel in the end), but the shaky cam technique needs to be put out of its misery.
I am always astounded when writers don't know the difference between "its" and it's." In the phrase "the shaky cam technique needs to be put out of it's misery." the correct form is "its" which is the possessive form. "It's" is a contraction of "it is."
Jul 13 - 09:28 AM
Thanks for the lesson. I never went to school for this. I just write out of passion. I don't pretend to be a good writer, just passionate about what I write. Thanks again! :)
Jul 13 - 09:37 AM
Please delete your comment as it adds no value
Jul 13 - 07:41 PM
Brian, you tsundere
Jul 19 - 10:28 PM