is it just me

or is this thread back?
Brendan Sullivan
09-30-2013 07:14 PM

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gunter m.

gunter meisner

it's a sfx movie so the rest of it is merely adequate but hey you get to see outer space without being up there.

Oct 6 - 09:16 PM

Brendan Sullivan

Brendan Sullivan

yeah I did have a review of this movie and how good it really was but some jack off deleted it.

Oct 6 - 09:56 PM

Brendan Sullivan

Brendan Sullivan

what the hell happened to my review.

Oct 6 - 06:41 PM

Bobby Conway

*What
*?

Oct 6 - 06:42 PM

Brendan Sullivan

Brendan Sullivan

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Oct 6 - 07:00 PM

Chase Nyland

Chase Nyland

Unfunny.

Oct 6 - 07:01 PM

Brendan Sullivan

Brendan Sullivan

not suppose to be

Oct 6 - 07:03 PM

Nathan Baker

Nathan Baker

I thought this movie was so boring. If the only thing you can think of to keep the story going is more space debris, save us the trouble and make the movie 30 minutes shorter. Can't understand what people find so fascinating about this movie. Visually it's awesome, but I like intricate plots, character development, and dialog, and this movie offers none of that.

Oct 6 - 06:34 PM

Brendan Sullivan

Brendan Sullivan

I liked it but I thought it was way overrated.

Oct 6 - 06:49 PM

Chase Nyland

Chase Nyland

If you like intricate plots, character development, and dialogue, then the run time should be longer and not shorter.

Oct 6 - 06:59 PM

Nathan Baker

Nathan Baker

Or they could replace 30 minutes of space debris with story.

Oct 6 - 07:23 PM

Chase Nyland

Chase Nyland

Then you're dealing with 30 minutes of story and 30 minutes of space debris. The film is 91 minutes king. Think about what you're saying.

Oct 6 - 08:30 PM

Nathan Baker

Nathan Baker

I don't think math is your strong suit. If you replace 30 minutes of space debris with 30 minutes of story then you still have a 90 minute movie.

Oct 6 - 08:47 PM

Terry Belli

Terry Belli

GRAVITY: I love Sandra Bullock and saw the movie today because of her. Story line was a ?what if? scenario and the outer space effects of their space shuttle being blown into smithereens spiraled into a sort of video game montage. Almost any good National Geographic outer space imaginings and images of earth would be comparable.

Oct 6 - 09:54 AM

You You See

You You See

Thanks Terry ..didn't understand what you said ,but quoto's for saying it .

Oct 6 - 11:59 AM

Chase Nyland

Chase Nyland

This is why people call you retarded.

Oct 6 - 04:53 PM

You You See

You You See

that hoits ! lol..sometime you are funny ,not very often tho .

Oct 6 - 04:55 PM

Chase Nyland

Chase Nyland

Perhaps it's because you can't understand my eloquent lexicon. :)

Oct 6 - 04:58 PM

You You See

You You See

ops ,i pushed spam botten by mastake ,can't undo .
anyway speak englis

Oct 6 - 05:05 PM

Chase Nyland

Chase Nyland

I am speaking English. I can't help it if you have the IQ of a pubic hair.

Oct 6 - 05:26 PM

You You See

You You See

Me no pubic hare hmmm ,that would be some funny looking rabbit . i can google crap to ..bigdeal

Oct 6 - 05:34 PM

Chase Nyland

Chase Nyland

Huh? I didn't Google anything. What do you mean by "funny looking rabbit?"

Oct 6 - 06:17 PM

Chase Nyland

Chase Nyland

Ohhhhhh, I get it! You used a homonym! Damn, I feel stupid now.

Oct 6 - 06:19 PM

You You See

You You See

stupid is as stupid does..quote : Forest Nyland

Oct 6 - 08:54 PM

Nightbreed

Dr. Decker

I wasn't impressed. Not enough character development, and the story becomes laughable near the end.

Oct 6 - 06:14 AM

Andy F.

Andy Ference

Nailed it.

Oct 6 - 06:37 AM

Arthur G.

Arthur Garnback

Oh, there wasnt not charecter develpment in Drive either.

Oct 6 - 02:44 PM

Fragnor Lagtorn

Fragnor Lagtorn

I agree. It was not as sharp or 3d as it could have been had they filmed this FOR IMAX or done the 3d in house. I personally was shocked when I saw the rotten tomatoes ratings. This movie was not good in any category.

Oct 6 - 11:50 AM

You You See

You You See

This is a really funny thread , didn't think you guys had it in you .
10% GRAVITY 90% funny, great job ,cheques in the mail .

Oct 4 - 10:29 PM

Bill the B.

Bill the Butcher

You cannot truly be this ignorant....

Oct 5 - 04:44 PM

You You See

You You See

lighten up Willy

Oct 5 - 06:04 PM

Arthur G.

Arthur Garnback

Dese peple are grummer nasis.

Oct 6 - 02:45 PM

Brendan Sullivan

Brendan Sullivan

tells mi abut it

Oct 6 - 09:44 PM

You You See

You You See

they think they are,most dese peple lol

Oct 6 - 04:07 PM

Allan Martin

Allan Martin

This picture is amazing. I can not imagine not seeing it for a second time.

Oct 4 - 04:13 PM

Zane B

Chum Chum

Is there an actual topic to this thread or are we just arguing with a child?

Oct 4 - 03:52 PM

All-Knowing Panda

The Incredible Panda Hulk

I just saw the movie, sorry Brendan, but this was one of the most intelligent pieces of cinema I have seen in a very long time.

Oct 3 - 10:26 PM

Brendan Sullivan

Brendan Sullivan

well I've got see it now. Since you liked it...no sarcasm intended. I will see if I like it for myself.

Oct 4 - 12:09 PM

Bobby Conway

*Well
*to

Oct 4 - 01:03 PM

Tayo Akomolede

Tayo Akomolede

Just saw this movie, and I'm sorry to inform you Brendan Sullivan however, this was easily the best film I've seen all year. Better than Rush or Fruitvale Station. George Clooney and Sandra Bullock absolutely nailed it acting wise and the film was suspenseful throughout, leaving several questions unanswered at the end. This is simply a must see film and visually one of the greatest achievements as far as special effects/general effect are concerned. See this movie immediately.

Oct 3 - 09:25 PM

David Tanny

David Tanny

Cool to know, Tayo. Thanks for sharing!

Oct 3 - 09:31 PM

Tayo Akomolede

Tayo Akomolede

Your welcome. I saw it in IMAX 3D btw and it was a blast. Theater had a good amount of people there, too which was nice. Strangely the most packed theater of a movie I've seen this year was White House Down. I liked that movie a lot and was disappointed that it got poor reviews after seeing it.

Oct 3 - 10:05 PM

David Tanny

David Tanny

I want to see it in IMAX 3D as well. Hope it's worth it. I'm curious to see what the general audience reaction will be like.

Oct 3 - 10:07 PM

Brendan Sullivan

Brendan Sullivan

glad you liked it.

Oct 3 - 10:01 PM

Bobby Conway

*Glad

Oct 4 - 12:46 AM

You You See

You You See

Awww crap now i have to go see it !

Oct 3 - 11:31 PM

Chase Nyland

Chase Nyland

Glad you enjoyed it, man! I'll be seeing it early next week.

Oct 4 - 12:45 PM

Ash J. Gilmore

Ash J. Get To The Choppa!

I'm sorry, but how can you still think this movie looks bad?

Oct 3 - 07:09 PM

Brendan Sullivan

Brendan Sullivan

Trailer doesn't show shit about what the movie is going to be about. I don't want to watch a 1 and 1/2 movie, which doesn't explain anything in the trailer.

Oct 3 - 09:06 PM

Ash J. Gilmore

Ash J. Get To The Choppa!

Oh, I see. You're one of those people that like to have the whole plot spoon-fed to them during the trailers. The whole point of a movie like this is the experience and not knowing the entire story going in.

Oct 3 - 09:19 PM

Brendan Sullivan

Brendan Sullivan

Did I what so ever say that in my comment there?

Oct 3 - 10:01 PM

Chris Bode

Chris Bode

Seriously... I saw this movie last night and the fact that the trailer doesn't give the whole movie away is absolutely fantastic. This is a film of the absolute highest quality...the kind that only comes along once every 5-10 years.

Oct 4 - 05:10 AM

Brendan Sullivan

Brendan Sullivan

why do you guys say I want to see the whole movie in the trailer?

Oct 4 - 12:09 PM

Ash J. Gilmore

Ash J. Get To The Choppa!

That's basically what you said. You want the whole plot spoon fed to you in the trailer.

Oct 4 - 12:10 PM

Brendan Sullivan

Brendan Sullivan

dude you can't read then.

Oct 4 - 12:53 PM

Ash J. Gilmore

Ash J. Get To The Choppa!

And you still can't write.

Oct 4 - 01:40 PM

Brendan Sullivan

Brendan Sullivan

Because I didn't put "D"...really.

Oct 4 - 09:52 PM

Ash J. Gilmore

Ash J. Get To The Choppa!

You sure did.

Oct 3 - 10:09 PM

Ash J. Gilmore

Ash J. Get To The Choppa!

"Trailer doesn't show shit about what the movie is going to be about". This implies that you wanted them to explain more of the plot in the trailer, which is silly. Trailers should be more like Gravity's.

Oct 3 - 10:11 PM

Migs Rodriguez

Migs Rodriguez

^^EXACTLY!!!! I personally hate trailers that are over 2 mins

Oct 3 - 11:16 PM

Migs Rodriguez

Migs Rodriguez

^^EXACTLY!!!! I personally hate trailers that are over 2 mins

Oct 3 - 11:16 PM

Tommy South

Tommy South

So true. Trailers these days give away way too much.

Oct 4 - 05:37 AM

Brendan Sullivan

Brendan Sullivan

a little more information would be awesome. I did hate Ender's games trailer because it gave away the ending in the trailer.

Oct 4 - 12:10 PM

Brendan Sullivan

Brendan Sullivan

you're wrong asshole...this movie was good...shit!

Oct 5 - 10:20 PM

Bobby Conway

*You're

Oct 6 - 11:08 AM

Dave Van House

Dave Van House

who are you?

Oct 2 - 09:29 PM

Bobby Conway

*Who

Oct 2 - 10:41 PM

Brendan Sullivan

Brendan Sullivan

Who are you?

Oct 2 - 11:28 PM

Zane B

Chum Chum

Swallow me whole you dirty slut

Oct 2 - 06:35 AM

Catbus

Catbus !

Do you spread out behind the boat boat to catch the shark shark?

Oct 2 - 06:40 AM

Brendan Sullivan

Brendan Sullivan

I'm good

Oct 2 - 11:16 PM

You You See

You You See

is it just you see you see......Bruce Lee was the best...im his bastard son...Sandra o Sandra

Oct 1 - 11:29 PM

Chase Nyland

Chase Nyland

What the fuck are you talking about?

Oct 2 - 09:47 AM

Tayo Akomolede

Tayo Akomolede

So I tried to troll the Ender's Game forum but nobody is responding. Seriously, I called the movie Bender's Lame for crying out loud; where are the butthurt fanboys when you need them??

Oct 1 - 08:06 PM

David Tanny

David Tanny

Don't admit that here!

Oct 1 - 08:10 PM

Diego Tutweiller

Diego Hard With an Anus

Bender's Lame? Flame on.

Oct 1 - 08:15 PM

Brendan Sullivan

Brendan Sullivan

We really need more jokes about Kim or any other idiotic reality star on tv

Oct 1 - 10:27 PM

Ash J. Gilmore

Ash J. Get To The Choppa!

Go watch Disaster Movie then. Right up your alley.

Oct 3 - 07:10 PM

Brendan Sullivan

Brendan Sullivan

I meant funny jokes.

Oct 3 - 09:06 PM

You You See

You You See

this thread neads some GRAVITY

Oct 1 - 03:54 PM

Diego Tutweiller

Diego Hard With an Anus

And the stupidity continues.

Oct 1 - 08:14 PM

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You You See

You You See

whats a fagot..smel

Oct 1 - 04:35 PM

Diego Tutweiller

Diego Hard With an Anus

Just when I thought this website couldn't get any stupider... you showed up.

Oct 1 - 08:14 PM

You You See

You You See

i see i see....stupider,is thier such a word,it's just plain stupid,stupid

Oct 2 - 09:46 AM

Brendan Sullivan

Brendan Sullivan

yes. It actually is a word, but it's not grammatically correct. Makes you should ignorant.

Oct 2 - 12:46 PM

Diego Tutweiller

Diego Hard With an Anus

I apologize profusely, you misguided, inbred piece of shit. I was merely attempting to convey my disgust for you via common vernacular. By the way, "Makes you should ignorant?" What the fuck does that even mean?

Oct 2 - 01:29 PM

Brendan Sullivan

Brendan Sullivan

Whatever you ignorant motherfucker. Just be a fucken man and admit you made a mistake. We're all human, but you just have your head up your own ass and believe you do no wrong. So shut up and admit. God damn. Now I'm going to be a man and say I fuck up on that grammar; like I've done in the past. There you go. Are you happy?

Oct 2 - 05:55 PM

Brendan Sullivan

Brendan Sullivan

*fucken actually
http://en.wiktionary.org/wiki/fucken

Oct 2 - 06:00 PM

FakeEntertainMeOrDie

FAKE-EMOD

lolwhut

Oct 2 - 06:07 PM

Bobby Conway

*Lol what?

Oct 2 - 06:12 PM

FakeEntertainMeOrDie

FAKE-EMOD

lolwhut

Oct 2 - 06:15 PM

Bobby Conway

*Lol what?

Oct 2 - 06:17 PM

Diego Tutweiller

Diego Hard With an Anus

Brendan, two things:

1) You just said yourself that 'stupider' is a word. But I'm not going to get into a discussion of slang words with you, so let's leave it at that.

2) Even if it WASN'T a word (which it is), your monumental grammatical errors eclipse it enormously. 'Stupider' is slang, and perhaps not grammatically perfect, but you clearly got the meaning of what I said. You, on the other hand, make grammar errors so egregious that it is nearly impossible to get any meaning from the idiotic things you spout off. I hope that, in time, you come to understand the difference.

Oct 2 - 06:19 PM

Brendan Sullivan

Brendan Sullivan

again it's a word, but it's like writing stupid on your forehead. Now as my grammar goes...like I said probably fives thousand times. Who care about grammar correctness? I'm just being a dick right now because of the way you've been a huge dick over the past posts about my grammar. By the way; I sometimes purposely just to piss people off. That's beside the point. Pointing it out on your grammar is just funny, because you flipped out and that hilarious. Again...I don't give a shit about grammar on a discussion board.

Oct 2 - 07:06 PM

Diego Tutweiller

Diego Hard With an Anus

"again it's a word, but it's like writing stupid on your forehead."

I don't know... what this means... anyway, who "care" about grammar correctness? I care. I care because, when I see a person of my generation using retarded grammar in their writing, I know that others will then in turn make unfair generalizations about us Millennials (i.e. that all of us have grammar as bad as you do, and are thereby stupid). Because of this, you do a disservice to your age group and contribute to the stereotype that young people are incapable of writing coherent sentences. You, Roshit, and (if he is a teenager) You You See are all making us look bad. Step up your game.

Oct 2 - 08:07 PM

Brendan Sullivan

Brendan Sullivan

Sorry to say it but again I'm past your fucking generation. I'm not a teenager and I'm an adult. You stereotype me as having this terrible bad grammar. This accusation is totally bullshit and obviously needs to stop. Have you seen (since it just been talking resulting) have terrible grammar? No...of course not. Because if I really wanted to have well stated grammar then I would. But, of course I don't give a flying fuck because in the real word grammar only looks good on a piece of paper (that's a metaphor by the way). Does this make me stupid? No! Not at all because again I can still get my points across (well most of the time at least). That's what you learn in a language arts class. You'll always have editors that will worry about the grammar part, so fuck it. I don't care. People telling my grammar is bad or terrible shows people's ignorance. If I wanted to be a dick...which of course I'm not. I can point out grammar flaws in your sentences as well. So go and be a douche about...because I could give two shuts.

Oct 2 - 11:26 PM

Diane Q.

Diane Quinton

Too long. Didn't read.

Oct 3 - 01:20 AM

Diego Tutweiller

Diego Hard With an Anus

Yeah, basically what Diane said, but most of that was impossible to read because of your horrible grammar. And sorry if I couldn't keep track of which made-up age you were today. And I'm sorry, are you trolling or not? You flip-flop more than Mitt Romney.

Oct 3 - 03:55 PM

Brendan Sullivan

Brendan Sullivan

sorry you couldn't comprehend that. I'll write it for a toddler next time.

Oct 3 - 05:29 PM

Bobby Conway

*Sorry

Oct 3 - 06:12 PM

Diego Tutweiller

Diego Hard With an Anus

No, I believe you write LIKE a toddler. That's why I couldn't understand it.

Oct 3 - 08:06 PM

Brendan Sullivan

Brendan Sullivan

Excuses, excuse. Stop making excuses for being wrong.

Oct 3 - 09:07 PM

Diego Tutweiller

Diego Hard With an Anus

Who was this directed at?

Oct 4 - 04:24 PM

Gabe Tugendstein

Gabe Tugendstein

This has got to stop.

Oct 4 - 04:52 PM

Gabe Tugendstein

Gabe Tugendstein

If you're both such God damn geniuses in the field of the English language than why the hell are you wasting your time trying to piss someone off in A THREAD FOR THE MOVIE GRAVITY.

Oct 4 - 04:54 PM

Bobby Conway

Lol what?

Oct 4 - 05:00 PM

FakeEntertainMeOrDie

FAKE-EMOD

*lolwhut

Oct 4 - 05:05 PM

Bobby Conway

*Lol what?

Oct 4 - 06:03 PM

Brendan Sullivan

Brendan Sullivan

Gabe...I never said I was so great at English. I'm just point out that he's an asshole for thinking he's so great at English. Diego...obviously you.

Oct 4 - 09:53 PM

Monco Person

Movie Person

Is it just me, or is Brendan an attention whore? Right fellas?

I'm here all week.

Oct 1 - 12:40 PM

Brendan Sullivan

Brendan Sullivan

I only did it because Castor wanted it.

Oct 1 - 03:18 PM

David Tanny

David Tanny

Hey, don't pin this shit on me. I didn't fuckin hypnotize your ass.

Oct 1 - 03:36 PM

Monco Person

Movie Person

Excuses, excuses Brendan.

Oct 1 - 04:26 PM

Brendan Sullivan

Brendan Sullivan

If u really think I'm attention then fine. How about this "I'll leave this site until the movie comes out' then we'll see who the real attention horrors on here are"

Oct 1 - 10:26 PM

Diego Tutweiller

Diego Hard With an Anus

You wrote 'u' instead of 'you.' Please, tell me about all those milliseconds you saved.

Oct 2 - 08:08 PM

Brendan Sullivan

Brendan Sullivan

Flowing between sentences said me plenty of time

Oct 2 - 11:27 PM

Monco Person

Movie Person

Does Flowing between sentences have anymore bits of wisdom to share with us.

Oct 3 - 09:14 AM

Diego Tutweiller

Diego Hard With an Anus

"Flowing between sentences said me plenty of time"

The fuck does this mean?

Oct 3 - 08:07 PM

Brendan Sullivan

Brendan Sullivan

we'll if you were smart and replace "said" with "saved", you would realize what I meant.

Oct 3 - 09:09 PM

Monco Person

Movie Person

Nah, it's just fun to point out your (many) errors.

Oct 4 - 11:09 AM

Brendan Sullivan

Brendan Sullivan

because you're a dick.

Oct 4 - 12:11 PM

Monco Person

Movie Person

Words hurt, ya know...

Oct 4 - 01:22 PM

Diego Tutweiller

Diego Hard With an Anus

So you're smart even though you make ridiculous errors in your writing, yet I am stupid for not translating the hieroglyphs you post accurately? Riiiiiight...

Oct 4 - 04:25 PM

Brendan Sullivan

Brendan Sullivan

no you're just an asshole for point out brain farts.

Oct 4 - 09:54 PM

Brendan Sullivan

Brendan Sullivan

josaph...you started it.

Oct 4 - 09:54 PM

Monco Person

Movie Person

Did I? Did I hurt your poor widdle feewings?

Oct 6 - 09:54 AM

All-Knowing Panda

The Incredible Panda Hulk

*I only created this thread because Castor wanted me to.

Oct 1 - 04:51 PM

Nightbreed

Dr. Decker

This is not a worthy thread to be the successor of the much superior one.

Oct 1 - 02:53 AM

Brendan Sullivan

Brendan Sullivan

blame the people at RT

Oct 1 - 08:46 AM

Bobby Conway

*Blame

Oct 1 - 11:33 AM

Brendan Sullivan

Brendan Sullivan

stop being a faggot

Oct 1 - 03:17 PM

Bobby Conway

*Stop

Oct 1 - 03:26 PM

All-Knowing Panda

The Incredible Panda Hulk

*You should stop behaving like a faggot. OR Could you stop being a faggot?

Oct 1 - 04:48 PM

Brendan Sullivan

Brendan Sullivan

He's not behaving though.

Oct 3 - 07:05 PM

All-Knowing Panda

The Incredible Panda Hulk

*You should blame the people of, the website, Rotten Tomatoes.

Oct 1 - 04:47 PM

Brendan Sullivan

Brendan Sullivan

For being faggots. They just won't listen

Oct 1 - 10:21 PM

Bobby Conway

*Is

Oct 1 - 02:14 AM

Brendan Sullivan

Brendan Sullivan

um...wrong answer. If you want to be a grammar nazi then do it right Or*

Oct 1 - 08:48 AM

Alex M.

Bob Saget

He's talking about the "is" in the title of your thread, genius.

Oct 1 - 10:17 AM

Brendan Sullivan

Brendan Sullivan

cool story

Oct 1 - 03:17 PM

Bobby Conway

*Cool

Oct 1 - 03:26 PM

All-Knowing Panda

The Incredible Panda Hulk

*That is a cool story. OR Cool story?

Oct 1 - 04:47 PM

All-Knowing Panda

The Incredible Panda Hulk

*Umm, that is the wrong answer. If you want to be a grammar Nazi then you should do it right, for example you should capitalize the word, 'Or' not 'Is'.

For now on i'll just correct your sentence, unless there is something new to be learned for you.

Oct 1 - 04:46 PM

Chase Nyland

Chase Nyland

Wow, you're a faggot.

Sep 30 - 11:47 PM

Alex M.

Bob Saget

Wel att leest hee haz bedder gramer then yu.

Oct 1 - 12:21 AM

Brendan Sullivan

Brendan Sullivan

get over yourself. Stupid whore of a person

Oct 1 - 08:48 AM

Monco Person

Movie Person

Chase is a manwhore, guys.

Oct 1 - 11:15 AM

Brendan Sullivan

Brendan Sullivan

I wouldn't disagree with u there

Oct 1 - 10:24 PM

Diego Tutweiller

Diego Hard With an Anus

*you, *missing period

Oct 2 - 01:29 PM

Brendan Sullivan

Brendan Sullivan

Again...and?

Oct 2 - 11:28 PM

Bobby Conway

@Brendan Sullivan
*Get

Oct 1 - 03:27 PM

All-Knowing Panda

The Incredible Panda Hulk

*Get over yourself, you stupid, whore of a person!

You needed, capitalization, punctuation, your second sentence was a sentence fragment (There was no subject, unless again you were stating it as a question. See, this is why punctuation is important!), also this should really only be one sentence (with an the you added so you know who the insult was directed at), there is no reason for it to be two.

Oct 1 - 04:42 PM

Diego Tutweiller

Diego Hard With an Anus

0/10, would not read again.

Sep 30 - 09:06 PM

Brendan Sullivan

Brendan Sullivan

2/10 so far

Oct 1 - 03:18 PM

All-Knowing Panda

The Incredible Panda Hulk

*My thread has an average score of 2/10, so far.

Oct 1 - 04:52 PM

All-Knowing Panda

The Incredible Panda Hulk

*Sighs and walks away*

Sep 30 - 08:49 PM

Brendan Sullivan

Brendan Sullivan

why did u click on it in the first place

Oct 1 - 08:47 AM

Bobby Conway

*Why
*you

Oct 1 - 11:34 AM

All-Knowing Panda

The Incredible Panda Hulk

*Why did you click on the link in the first place?

Needs capitalization, punctuation, misspelling, and you can't use the word it if you have not stated what you are referring to.

Oct 1 - 04:30 PM

Brendan Sullivan

Brendan Sullivan

this looks dumb. Happy David

Sep 30 - 07:37 PM

Catbus

Catbus !

Isn't Happy David the upcoming Adam Sandler biblical epic?

Sep 30 - 07:38 PM

Brendan Sullivan

Brendan Sullivan

I would have to look that up

Sep 30 - 07:41 PM

Catbus

Catbus !

I saw a Google on the way over here. It's still open, I think.

Oct 1 - 11:53 AM

All-Knowing Panda

The Incredible Panda Hulk

*I would have to look that up.

You needed punctuation.

Oct 1 - 04:40 PM

Bobby Conway

@Brendan Sullivan
*This

Oct 1 - 11:35 AM

Brendan Sullivan

Brendan Sullivan

you don't have to put the @ jackass.

Oct 1 - 03:19 PM

Bobby Conway

*You

Oct 1 - 03:28 PM

All-Knowing Panda

The Incredible Panda Hulk

*You don't need to use the '@' symbol, jackass.

You need proper capitalization, proper usage of commas in name calling, you need more specification on the symbol, and needed to re-word, 'don't have'.

Oct 1 - 04:36 PM

All-Knowing Panda

The Incredible Panda Hulk

*The movie, Gravity, looks dumb; are you happy, David?
You lacked, capitalization, proper punctuation, the second sentence is an incomplete thought (ie. Sentence Fragment) if you do not have the question mark, you should join them together with a semi-colon, you shouldn't use the pronoun 'this' if you have not already specified what 'this' is, and although you can say 'Happy, David?" it is more correct to say, "Are you happy, David?"

Oct 1 - 04:34 PM

David Tanny

David Tanny

No, no, no. You're doing it wrong. You're supposed to make a statement about how Gravity looks dumb. Sheesh. Try again please.

Sep 30 - 07:28 PM

Brendan Sullivan

Brendan Sullivan

happy

Sep 30 - 07:37 PM

Bobby Conway

*Happy

Oct 1 - 11:35 AM

Brendan Sullivan

Brendan Sullivan

cool story

Oct 1 - 03:20 PM

Bobby Conway

*Cool

Oct 1 - 03:29 PM

All-Knowing Panda

The Incredible Panda Hulk

*That is a cool story.

You needed capitalization, punctuation, and an action to make it a complete sentence, UNLESS you intended on it being a question, as if you were wondering if Bobby Conway's phrase was in fact a, 'cool story'.

Oct 1 - 04:39 PM

All-Knowing Panda

The Incredible Panda Hulk

*Are you happy?

However, if the diction was intended for effect, you could say, "Happy?"

You needed capitalization and punctuation.

Oct 1 - 04:37 PM

Catbus

Catbus !

Is it just meeeeeeeeOW!
Oh crap - what phase is the moon in?

Sep 30 - 07:18 PM

Brendan Sullivan

Brendan Sullivan

it's on a rotation today

Sep 30 - 07:19 PM

Catbus

Catbus !

That should keep it fresh.

Sep 30 - 07:24 PM

Brendan Sullivan

Brendan Sullivan

and interesting

Sep 30 - 07:26 PM

Catbus

Catbus !

If you ask me, I think that's where Judge Crater ended up.

Sep 30 - 07:31 PM

Brendan Sullivan

Brendan Sullivan

?

Sep 30 - 07:38 PM

Catbus

Catbus !

Of course.

Sep 30 - 09:35 PM

All-Knowing Panda

The Incredible Panda Hulk

Those two sentences are so bad they aren't even correctable, sorry to disappoint you, Sullivan.

Oct 1 - 04:49 PM

All-Knowing Panda

The Incredible Panda Hulk

*It's on a rotation today.

Oct 1 - 04:48 PM

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